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    Is this a callback to the events of chapter 1, where Chris brings his loved one in a restaurant, and ends up feeling like shit in no small part because of a waitress?

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    Quote Originally Posted by sacurason View Post
    Whaaaaaaat it's gotta be a trick, right? Right? Just a head game to make Christ submit himself more!
    It's always a good suggestion to challenge what you read in MenHaters Sacu. All will be revealed in the next chapter

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    Quote Originally Posted by OneAuthor View Post
    Let's hope that it is indeed a mind-game and Nicola hasn't actually dumped Chris in favor of the waitress.

    The reason for this hope is that everything in that chapter leading up to the scene in the French bakery seemed to indicate that Nicola had forgiven Chris and that their relationship was back on track. Even as a dominant it had seemed everything was going well between them - although of course running into Sophia at the coat shop was a sticky situation that Chris barely managed to navigate without arousing Nicola's suspicion.

    I did enjoy all of that and everything but the very end of the scene at the bakery, in which Chris sat under the booth and worshipped Nicola's feet while his goddess lured in the waitress - who was clearly a lesbian submissive. The part in the bathroom where Nicola dominated the waitress with her feet while Chris and the three female university students watched was very hot, but the aftermath of Nicola telling Chris he was being cast aside in favor of the waitress seemed over the top. As stated earlier, perhaps it was just a head game to unsettle Chris and make him yearn for her more.

    Let's see what happens next!
    Mind games are very much part and parcel of MenHaters and the amount of mind fucking going on should leave us remaining healthily skeptical. Either Nicola was really setting Chris up for a major fall or she is actually just teaching him a lesson as Sacu says to make him want her more.

    Sophia was her usual naughty self - she really gets in Chris' head - we find out why she is so good at this later in the story.

    Nicola as you then say is not really an over the top exhibitionist so I would remain optimistic at this point. That said Chris needs to ensure he gets away from that crazy waitress and those student pretty damn quickly. Let's hope that's the last he's seen of them!

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    Quote Originally Posted by StrayPhilosopher View Post
    Is this a callback to the events of chapter 1, where Chris brings his loved one in a restaurant, and ends up feeling like shit in no small part because of a waitress?
    Very impressive parallel drawing Stray - your ability to link different chapters will be an asset to you in putting the pieces of the story together later on!

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