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    Chapter 36 – Nicola’s Divergent Life When I...

    Chapter 36 – Nicola’s Divergent Life


    When I awoke Henrietta was still staring at me like she hadn’t moved a muscle, I noticed her face was stained with dried tear tracks as she smiled at me....
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    Hi Sacurason, Thanks for the comment my...

    Hi Sacurason,

    Thanks for the comment my friend!

    We are now entering the phase of the story where complex emotions start to emerge, lies vs. true feelings and seeds of the background to each...
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    Hi OneAuthor, Thanks for your comment! A...

    Hi OneAuthor,

    Thanks for your comment!

    A very nice summary and shows how uncomfortable Aurelia is with Chris' affection. As you say the harder her pushes the harder she pushes back - he has...
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    Chapter 35 – A New Dawn I awoke with a start...

    Chapter 35 – A New Dawn


    I awoke with a start the next morning as Aurelia entered my room and shouted, “Where the fuck is my breakfast slave?” I was almost out of bed with fright before I had...
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    Thank you OneAuthor - there early perspective...

    Thank you OneAuthor - there early perspective chapters are a little insight into how the story will evolve. Given Nicola has quite a powerful dominant side we will get to explore the world through...
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    Hi SonicMerlin Thanks for your support! The...

    Hi SonicMerlin

    Thanks for your support! The story has many twists and turns still and just where it will land might just keep you guessing a while longer. I think given your preferences you will...
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    Now finally...a view of what happened to Yuki......

    Now finally...a view of what happened to Yuki...


    Chapter 34 – The Trials of Yuki Nakama


    Yuki had got a text late on Sunday afternoon to be at work for 7am on Monday to meet with Beth. She...
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    First chapter from Nicola's perspective ...

    First chapter from Nicola's perspective


    Chapter 33 – The trials of Nicola Delmont


    I had ordered Henrietta under the table after she had made Chris and myself breakfast. I needed to put this...
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    First up - the rest of the day as see by Chris......

    First up - the rest of the day as see by Chris...


    Chapter 32 – The End of the Longest Day

    I arrived 5 minutes early for Aurelia’s first team meeting and all the women looked pissed off I had...
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    Just to let you all know in the chapters to come...

    Just to let you all know in the chapters to come - the story takes another twist by bringing in more perspectives as we start to see things unfold through the eyes of others. Nicola's view of the...
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    Beth did indeed put more than a spanner in thr...

    Beth did indeed put more than a spanner in thr works and shows just how wide and powerful her network is. She also didn't just split Nicola and Chris up but set them into traps that would be more...
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    Hi Parzival Thanks for your comment and...

    Hi Parzival

    Thanks for your comment and honesty. MenHaters is a story that provokes strong emotions one way or another and this chapter was quite potent in that respect.

    The story itself is...
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    To us readers it was quite the surprise Stray,...

    To us readers it was quite the surprise Stray, for Beth however I am sure it had more than an ounce of pre-meditation about it :-)
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    Chapter 31 – The Day Everything Changed Nicola...

    Chapter 31 – The Day Everything Changed

    Nicola was the first to awake on Monday morning, it was still very early and the sun was barely up. She had a lot of mixed emotions given the events of the...
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    Thanks for the great comments my friend! ...

    Thanks for the great comments my friend!

    Nicola obviously feels a lot for Chris and it is good to see she cares enough to share some of herself with him. The Lacrosse students are a pretty crazy...
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    Hi Sacurason I love the overpowering smell...

    Hi Sacurason
    I love the overpowering smell scenes for Chris - as time goes on in the story you will see the feelings during these scenes becoming more descriptive and intimate with the scent. Now...
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    Chapter 30 – A Weekend to Forget A few...

    Chapter 30 – A Weekend to Forget


    A few moments later I felt a painful knock in the side of my head. As I looked up I could see Nicola above me.

    She whispered, “I guess you do mean what is on...
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    Very impressive parallel drawing Stray - your...

    Very impressive parallel drawing Stray - your ability to link different chapters will be an asset to you in putting the pieces of the story together later on!
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    Mind games are very much part and parcel of...

    Mind games are very much part and parcel of MenHaters and the amount of mind fucking going on should leave us remaining healthily skeptical. Either Nicola was really setting Chris up for a major fall...
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    It's always a good suggestion to challenge what...

    It's always a good suggestion to challenge what you read in MenHaters Sacu. All will be revealed in the next chapter
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    For those readers - F/f starts in this next...

    For those readers - F/f starts in this next chapter as the story starts to splinter into multiple interweaving plot lines! F/m of course continues as well :-)

    Chapter 29 – The Waitress

    I didn’t...
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    Thank you for a great set of comments OneAuthor!...

    Thank you for a great set of comments OneAuthor!

    The heart breaking scenes with Nicola were more than difficult to write and navigate but then it was always going to happen with Chris being so...
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    Hi SonicMerlin, I am sure that really would be...

    Hi SonicMerlin, I am sure that really would be the end for Chris, but then the MenHaters are very adept at finding ways to make his life pretty miserable aren't they?

    Having survived the White and...
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    Chapter 28 – Black Friday Part 2 There was...

    Chapter 28 – Black Friday Part 2


    There was no further speaking in the car until after around twenty minutes the car pulled up. Aurelia grabbed my hand and started yanking at the ring Beth had...
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    Chapter 27 – Black Friday Part 1 I awoke early...

    Chapter 27 – Black Friday Part 1

    I awoke early at Nicola’s and looked at her sleeping by the side of me. Her face was the picture of beauty. I smiled recalling the night before. She really did put...
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