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silentjayhat
12-02-2013, 04:12 AM
Not much at the moment but it might go somewhere.


http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1905112-Footslave---the-History-of-Stenchlandia/action/outline


NOTE: not mine, just linking.

DARK2671
12-02-2013, 06:10 AM
Yeah, I've been following this story. Really have been enjoying it, thinking about contributing myself. Thanks for posting, maybe it'll get us to contribute. lol

DARK2671
16-02-2013, 04:19 AM
*Bump*

Just added this chapter (my username is DAONE241). Give your thoughts. Thanks.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1905112-Footslave---the-History-of-Stenchlandia/map/1311112

ForcedFeetSniff
16-02-2013, 06:09 PM
Hey. I like your addition to the story and I am glad that there are people with better writing abilities than me who keep continuing this one! This chapter gives an interesting turn to the story, although I have to admit that I personally would enjoy it more to read how the policewoman keeps ruling with her feet. I don't know why but I kind of feel more comfortable with that. I hope you liked this feedback.

DARK2671
17-02-2013, 04:01 AM
Thanks for the feedback! I'm still generating some ideas for the story (personally more of a fem vs. fem fan), so I'm sure Maria will get back to kicking butt with her smelly feet. :-)

ThatFootFetishGuy
02-03-2013, 10:58 AM
Just wanted to bump this up because a couple of really awesome chapters have been added (specifically the last one).

I've been following the story for a while and have been really impressed by the sheer volume of femdom angles offered by the story's setting. It makes me want to add to it, too. I sort of want to see Maria (the dominant SSS agent) get beaten and humiliated, in a role reversal twist. Maybe I can work on that...

DARK2671
20-03-2013, 05:47 AM
Just wanted to bump this up because a couple of really awesome chapters have been added (specifically the last one).

I've been following the story for a while and have been really impressed by the sheer volume of femdom angles offered by the story's setting. It makes me want to add to it, too. I sort of want to see Maria (the dominant SSS agent) get beaten and humiliated, in a role reversal twist. Maybe I can work on that...

*Bump*

Just added two new chapters (my username is DAONE241). Give your thoughts. Thanks.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1905112-Footslave---the-History-of-Stenchlandia/map/133

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1905112-Footslave---the-History-of-Stenchlandia/map/1331

Also check out Saicrit's recent additions. Dude is killing it..... in a great way. :-)

DARK2671
20-03-2013, 11:27 AM
** Bump**

Was just informed the links weren't working. Try these if you can.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1905112-Footslave---the-History-of-Stenchlandia/map/133



http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1905112-Footslave---the-History-of-Stenchlandia/map/1331

Otherwise, I'm not too sure why they're not working. Try heading to the beginning point of the story, then checking the most recently added section.
Thanks.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/cid/1474304

Saicrit
29-03-2013, 12:09 AM
Heh, thanks man. I'll definitely try to come up with some new ideas in the near future, as well!

ThatFootFetishGuy
02-04-2013, 12:25 PM
Seriously awesome work, Saicrit! The Maria/Vanessa chapters are some of the finest foot fetish pieces I've had the pleasure of reading on writing.com. I love how there's an option open for either woman to win and enslave the other. The only disappointment I felt was that the story arcs were ended, with no option to continue. Although I appreciate that it adds a certain poignancy to the story, I just love leaving it open for further scenes of humiliation at the feet of their owner, and perhaps the possibility of expanding the plot.

However, that's a minor quibble compared to the awesome work you did. Keep it up! Hopefully I'll find the time to contribute in the future, too. :)

DARK2671
03-04-2013, 04:58 AM
Saicrit's a beast when it comes to the written word. :-) I'm trying to be like him when I grow up, lol.

Saicrit
04-04-2013, 07:52 PM
Yay! I'm really happy to hear that some people are enjoying my writing. That really motivates you a LOT if you just came home after a long, shitty day of work... Trust me on that one.
Anyway, I agree with you, ThatFootFetishGuy; I absolutely love how the Interactive Stories on writing.com can "branch away" like that... As in, maybe you have two really sweet ideas, but they would conflict with each other... With that, you can just do both of them, and it won't interfere since it's in a whole different "instance". Like I said, that's really cool.

As for the endings... Yeah, I guess I just wanted to make a few of those, once in a while. Sometimes... it happens that there's a really good story that's at one point completely destroyed by someone making a really shitty chapter. I've actually tried to "revive" one of those stories on writing.com before (It worked, too), but still... If you just force your end in like that, BAM, then there's no way anyone could fuck that up. Also, I always make sure that there's another free option right before the end, so if someone wants to add to it, they can still do it while not having to start all over again. It will just be a bit... earlier. Story wise.

By the way, if you liked my adds on the Stenchlandia story, be sure to also check out those of the user "Afan". The parts he did are also really, really damn sweet.

Also, don't worry about the future; I already have a "master plan" for the story. I wanna make it really long, with something like a civil war, maybe including another nation, possibly some "sciency" stuff... I'm not entirely sure about it yet, but I know it will be sweet!

12312
11-04-2013, 01:03 AM
really enjoying the story, is there anyway to get a chapter of Maria beating down on a guy and forcing some smell action? Girl on girl just doesn't get me going 100% :P. I'm honestly glad to just see some new material though so thanks for all of the recent updates!

DARK2671
11-04-2013, 02:35 AM
Hi 123. I think that question was for Saicrit, if I'm correct. I've been posting under the DAONE screenname on the story, so didn't know if you were referring to those posts. I'm more of a fan of the fem/ fem fighting, but maybe one of the other authors might try out fem/ male. Thanks for the interest.