View Full Version : Story Pitch for Footsmelling/ Female Footfighting series

25-12-2012, 11:08 PM
First off, glad to be back at the forum.

Good evening. I'm trying to put together a pitch/ story idea for a footsmelling/ forced footworship/ female fighting comic book series, and wanted to run it past you guys, and get some thoughts on the idea.

In the process of putting together characters bios, plotting out the stories, etc. Just wanted some constructive criticism, so please shoot any and that you have to me.

FFFL: Fragrant Foot Fighting League

In the tradition of fighting tournament games/ anime such as Street Fighter, Mortal Kombat, Variable Geo, Ikki Tousen, comes the FFFL. Structured in the vein of the WWE the FFFL is a league composed of the best of the world's best female fighters, with fighting disciplines ranging from boxing to martial arts.

Founded in 2012, the league brings together combatants from a variety of backgrounds who all have one goal in mind: to become a FFFL champion. The FFFL features a host of divisions for competitors to compete in, ranging from tag team to the heavyweight divisions.

If you want to see the world's best compete in an all out smackdown fracas of epic proportion, look no further, because the FFFL aims to please. With a variety of colorful personalities including some of the wickedest female fighters the world has to offer, the FFFL is a fighting experience that can't be beat. The heels are definitely in abundance.

Now in a world where there are no shortage of female fighting leagues, you might ask yourself, what seperates the FFFL from any other?

One sentence: The funkiest feet on the face of the earth.

In addition to kick ass fighting, the fighters of this league will use they're fragrant toes to ultimately win their respective matches. Whether it be a full on foot smother, or quick whiffs of smelling dangerously smelly feet, more often the naught, the fighter with the most pungent toes wins the fight. With an emphasis on foot humiliation, and even forced foot worship/tickling, the FFFL will the fighting league which every foot fetishist has ever dreamed of.

The story of the FFFL will be told through the eyes of a newcomer of the league, whose looking to make a name for herself.

Let's get ready to lay down some sweaty soles.

Thoughts? I'm also looking for artists, so if you have any to suggest, definitely shoot those over. Thanks for any feedback/ advice that you can provide.

25-12-2012, 11:58 PM
I've got no criticism or useful comments, except to say I just love the idea. Just imagine it! Good luck! :)

26-12-2012, 01:43 AM
yeah go for it i'd like to watch and judge too :)

26-12-2012, 06:43 AM
Ergle/ Sniffguy: Thanks for the feedback. :-)

Now I just have to find an artist.... lol