View Full Version : Quitting Time

31-08-2011, 09:32 PM
Just thought I would re post to generate interest, I will be writing the sequel to this work shortly as a 'welcome back' gift to everyone. Let me know if you haven't read it and decide its decent I tried my best.


It was almost three in the morning, which meant quitting time for Barbara was finally near. It had been a long sweltering evening at the bar which she managed, and she could think of nothing more divine than finally getting off her aching feet and into a cold shower. The weekend was particularly busy, and she had recently made it custom for the establishment

31-08-2011, 09:36 PM
It keeps getting cut off, Sorry. I attached the text...I suppose that works for now.

02-09-2011, 12:04 AM
a really really fantastic story! cant wait for the sequal

02-09-2011, 02:45 AM
a really really fantastic story! cant wait for the sequal
Thanks so much, hoping to finish it up this weekend :)

03-09-2011, 06:02 AM
Superb! That was sooo fuckin hot!!! I just came through my shorts while reading it! Thank you soo much!!:)

Mr Sweden
12-12-2011, 06:56 PM
Thank you Savored! Great story..! One of the best I ever read. ;) Look forward to read the last part..

12-12-2011, 08:00 PM
Awesome Story well done Sarah...TJB.